when the fish swallows the hook, the night falls, dragging purple down into the belly of the sea. to the little red cooler on the dock comes the blue gill — sore stomach heaving, spine twisted in his body, body molded furiously to the cup of my hand. I touch the scaling under his rolling eyes, press the pad of my thumb against his bulbous jelly lips, hold him — heaving chest and the sweaty slope of his jaw, the shuddering, guts spilling out white throat, hook snarled up into matted organ mass — and wind the line around my hand,
and yank.
Photo Credit: JW
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