He said, she said.
You can’t say that.
He said.
Okay.
She said.
Nope.
Duly redacted.
He said.
Not sure now.
So.
That can stand.
How about, “She allegedly said.”
That makes it sounds like it was written by a lawyer.
It WAS written by a lawyer.
He said. She allegedly said.
No.
Redacted.
What if it was anonymized?
He said. An anonymous respondent said?
Well such a comment would have no standing in law. It could be included in the full report but would have to be redacted in the published version.
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LOL! Loved all the anguish over the very first sentence. Political correctness at its finest.
Love it!
Creative writing. I like that you did not politicize the subject & the artistic choppy sentence pattern. Nice work!
excellent! I love the sarcastic humor and the layout is both strong and appropriate to the style.