In Every Girl There Is a Forest
In every forest there is a cabin. In every cabin there is a stove. In every stove there is an ash pile. In every ash pile there is a bone. In every bone there is a story. In every story there is a yearning. In every yearning there is a prize. In every prize there is a cost. In every cost there is a cut. In every cut there is a ghost. In every ghost there is a home. In every home there is a witch. In every witch there is a girl. In every girl there is a forest.
Photo Credit: Khánh Hmoong
. In every cost there is a cut. – a great line – a great sentence – I think this would make for a darn powerful spoken word piece
Jonathan-Loved the rhythm and the story.
Good one, John! A keeper!
Love this! This has a beat and a rhythm and a magic.
Really enjoyed the feeling this 100 worder created, like softly tumbling down and finding yourself back where you started.
Thanks for taking us down this remarkable rabbit hole. One thing does lead to another — good one.
Wow, this is fantastic. Love it.
These are confusing because some of the stuff doesn’t match up for how this leads to that or how you go from here to there. The name of it made it engaging,
Dayse–I appreciate the feedback and critique. It’s a bit of a puzzle, isn’t it? Sorry to hear it didn’t resonate with you, but thanks for giving it a read!
The puzzle of this piece is what makes it so intriguing! I love it so much!
I have to agree. Most of these seem random. The title is what drew me in.